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37539 Re: Voklavian Short short Story - Zim
   How about the way I first wrote it. >> Tril-Liana walked into the...
Zimbler0   POPE IV   27 Oct 2017
6:00 AM
37538 Re: Voklavian Short short Story - Zim
   ..or a little humour ... .... she mumbles to herself "(appropriate...
monkeytrots   POPE IV   27 Oct 2017
5:47 AM

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Re: Voklavian Short short Story - Zim

By: monkeytrots in POPE IV
Fri, 27 Oct 17 5:32 AM
Msg. 37537 of 47202
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Well, let's just spell that insubordination out ... and not make the audience guess - after all we can't see her body language. *s*

change: Walking into the Admiral's outer office, Tril-Liana realizes she is in her class-C uniform, every day work clothes; not the class-A Dress appropriate for meeting an Admiral.

to: Walking into the Admiral's outer office in her Class-C every day work uniform, Tril-Lana knows the code calls for Class-A Dress when summoned by an Admiral. Breaking stride for a second, she mumbles to herself "(appropriate Voklavian euphemism for I really don't give a rats ass.)".

*w*





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