Some pretty glaring and grating errors in grammar, sentence structure, and wordsmithing in them.
My apologies. Hopefully the guts of the messages managed to creep through. Re-emphasizes the need for multiple drafts to refine my writing.
Compos(t)ing solely on computer doesn't hack it for me. A printout and arming with red pencil works better. (and a good long timeout period before each edit pass.)
Will keep that in mind for any serious work from now on.
Finally, brethren, whatsoever things are true, whatsoever things are honest, whatsoever things are just, whatsoever things are pure, whatsoever things are lovely, whatsoever things are of good ...